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I loved this. I do love a story that leaves us with an open ending rather than tying everything up in a little bow.

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Thank you, Fiona! Really glad you enjoyed it 😁

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This is one of a few recent stories I read where the horror was left mysterious and unexplained. I like it that way - a monster or event is much more terrifying when it's left to the imagination.

Good imagery here too, the scene with all the lights blinking out ran like a movie shot in my mind.

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I agree about leaving the monster ambiguous, it's much better to leave it to the imagination.

I don't know if you saw my note about this story, but this really happened to me when I was walking home one night from a friend's house. A car kept driving past me with no lights on and I don’t know how the driver could navigate 🤷‍♂️ lol

But thank you for the feedback, glad it had thst effect!

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